literature

the hum of the honeysuckle sun

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1.large breasts
don't make you sexy
anymore than a large gun
makes a man
an excellent hunter

2.(there's more
a cosmos collapsed
inside your skull

a soap opera
painted into a corner
by the brainwashing

thought bubbles of a drowning
pop audibly
another's name)

3.you're a honeysuckle sun
hung wild above the plastic
the pink puddles
the wasted candles
no ghosts, no stories

4.you look down upon the abstract
and feel so
you look down upon the lost
and feel so

but you are a collector
your kisses are butterflies
pinned inside a quiet room
this needs so much editing, but whether it gets or not..we'll see. and whether it makes sense pre/post surgery is anyone's guess(or opinion)
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TheMajesticCarnival's avatar
i love it...its beautiful the way it is.